Rough Version One.
Rough Version Two.
I tried executing both versions and version two worked the best in terms of practicality and communication. I also decided that i will do many photo edits and artifical additions (question marks, exclamation marks etc.) to enhance the communication process in my story.
Here is my final product titled:
Tanning Tip #3: Try Not To Oversleep
So...did you get what's going on in the pictures?
I had to do quite a bit of editing work like enhancing the brightness and sunny-ness of the pictures (it was almost rainy-weather the day i chose to take these photos), add in more leaves in the 3rd frame (it was really, really hard getting a good shot of flying leaves), use exclamation points to enhance reactions and making the sun-burn on the boy more obvious. It was time-consuming, but quite rewarding after i get the final product!
I think the message in my frames was clear enough as there were no suggestions to make any edits to them during the critic session today, which is a good thing! :)
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