The only critics i got was for the last alphabet 'N'. Previously, i had seaweed in the background behind the dolphin but it was suggested that i remove to allow focus to be on the dolphin and corals itself. Also, i was told to push and tilt the coral on the far right side outwards to make the 'N' more obvious.
As for the sweet-treats design, it was suggested that i extend the hook of the candy-cane in the 'a' to make it look more like one and tilt the wafer in the 'n' more towards the right to make the 'n' more obvious. Prof. Lin suggested that i change the colours of the candy cane in the 'a' and stick in the 'n' to make them look like a part of the bigger component, and so that they don't look like seperate entities.
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